Thanks for all your comments. I have the same criticisms as many of you. I'm still trying to figure out how to control digital. In the end, it came out much darker on dpchallenge than on my computer. Same with the artifacting. Thanks for the encouragement! With such good feedback I'm more interested in figuring this thing out.
Good curves for him and her. I like the blinds. Would have been interesting had the blinds casted shadows on the bodies. I also noticed that the picture is a bit too dark and low in contrast.
Only one more day until it's revealed just whose arse it really is. As for the shot, I would've chose a different more uniform background. Half wall/half shade doesn't work well in my mind.
I thik this shot would have been alot better if the blinds didn't stop before the edges of the frame. If the light like that could continue from edged to edge it would have looked like really cool studio lighting. As is it is really distracting and takes away from what would otherwise be an outstanding photo.
The AC grid in the background would work a lot better if it were parallel with the edge of the frame and if it ran the full width of the shot. As it is, it doesn't quite look like it's supposed to be there.
the camera is slightly tilted.. it's very much noticable in the blinds on the window. fantastic shot though. Maybe zoom in a bit, or position your camera differently so the end of the blinds isn't in the picture.
The lines of lght through the blinds really contrast the 'hers' curves, but the light on the foreground doesn't pick up the 'his' enough to emphasise the different person.
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