There is so much good about this shot. I kind of like the fact that she is laughing. It almost seems like a parody of those old shots. Great costume and sepia. I think you are off to a great start working with models. The slight tilt is the only thing I might change. Good work!
What a great take on this challenge! So well done too! Another one that seems incredibly underrated. The sepia tones and the way she's dressed give it such an awesome nostalgic feel to it!
similar to my origianl idea:) you need a dastardly man with a handle bar mustache. I like the tone you used. the models expression looks more like laughing than screaming but great job overall. 9
The subject looks more like they are laughing than crying for help IMO. The composition and coloring are good. I like the amount of noise or blur in the background too. 6.
lol. I hope you knew what you were doing. Anyway, the angle you took the picture gives the impression that the railroad is leaning towards left (which I think it was not the case). I know you tried to get the lady to be on the horizontal, but when looking at the whole picture, she's sliding to the left also. I think a small rotation to the right would have helped. Otherwise nice shot! I like the sepia tone (maybe toned down a little?) and the sureal look on the bushes (trees).
I can't help but think of the song -
Along Came Jones by The Coasters (last verse)
I got so bugged I turned it off and turned on another show
But there was the same old shoot 'em up and the same old rodeo
Salty Sam was tryin' to stuff Sweet Sue in a burlap sack
He said, 'If you don't give me the deed to your ranch
I'm gonna throw you on the railroad tracks!'
And then he grabbed her (And then)
He tied her up (And then)
He threw her on the railroad tracks (And then)
A train started comin' (And then, and then...!)
And then along came Jones
Tall thin Jones
Slow walkin' Jones
Slow talkin' Jones
Along came long, lean, lanky Jones
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