The composition here is a bit lacking. It feels a bit indecisive as to where you wanted to place the subject. Just slightly off-center, and not really to the right, yet leaning to the left. It just makes the whole thing FEEL off kilter. You don't want people to get that feeling when the look, because then they're not sure how to vote ;)
This is a very nice and clean white BG, but I'm not sure it really servers the photo all that well. Actually, I'm thinking a more complicated setup would feed better into the joke at the bottom. Maybe laying in a piney bed of underbrush or somthing. A little more complex, but still do-able indoors. Lighting here is good, I like the shiny wetness of the peas contrasted with the earthy pinecone tones.
I, personally, am not fond thepicture depending entirely upon the title. If it can't stand as a picture without the title at all, then the concept comes across weakly, deadens the impact of the idea. I'm not saying that a title can't be the icing, but they should compliment each other, not ride upon the back of the other to carry the photo.
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Cute idea. ;^) It's a bit static however. Nothing really saying 'Wow' in the composition. It's just there, know what I mean? Nothing personal. Negative space can work, as can centered subjects, at times, but doesn't seem to be adding anything to the impact of this shot. Maybe in tighter, a little angle? Could be a little sharper perhaps too? Just throwing some ideas out there. Best of luck to you in the challenge.
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