Color adjustment needs to be different. This one has too much yellow. Composition is way too busy. Less items would have come off better. Also, think the overall it just doesn't do anything for me.
I like your idea and the use of many colors. I do feel that the photo is too busy and it doesn't feel like a composed still life. I find the feet distracting as well.
A still life generally brings together a number of elements arranged by the artist into an eyecatching grouping. I can't believe that if you'd arranged this, you'd have intentionally added feet. Colours are nice and bright, but it's overexposed so very glarey.
I'm afraid it's just way too cluttered and unappealing. The colors seem to be oversaturated, and there's just too much junk randomly scattered through it. What does a remote control have to do with anything... or random toes here and there? I'm sorry to sound harsh on this one, but it just seems like a rather haphazardly thrown together shot.
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