This is a very fitting grain picture. The grain looks like it belongs, and adds a lot to the picture. I think the picture might have had more impact if it utilized the rule of thirds and had her off to one side instead of dead center. But I think the picture is really strong anyway.
Nice light application of grain... and desat here... gives it a kind of dreamy, otherworldly type look. I'm not sure I care for the fact that she is dead center... and it might have been interesting to have her maybe in the bottom right corner... with the pole leading up to her? Nice image though.