Challenge:School Days (Basic Editing I) Camera:Canon EOS-1D Location: Santa Monica Date: Oct 17, 2004 Aperture: 22 ISO: 200 Shutter: 1/21 Date Uploaded: Oct 18, 2004
I disagree with it being cluttered. The top clutter borders the image in a unique way, although I agree that the shadowy object at the top could have been left out... but not the piece under it. Love the parachute doodle on the pad. Love this picture. Definite favourite from this competition. I may be bias though since I'm flying next semester!
This photograph is a little bit top heavy. I'd move the airplane down so its tail is closer to the bottom left corner, and remove the object at the top which is creating a shadowy spot. Other than that, I think this is a nice twist on the topic and well-executed.