If I understand the intent, a different lighting showing off the glass reflections and transparency, possibly a less opaque type of glass and a perfect reflection, would have turned this into a very high scoring image.
This way probably not.
Along with many very good instructionals online , many say this book is the bible of tricky materials studio photography: Light: Science and Magic: An Introduction to Photographic Lighting, if that can help.
Unless I completely missed your intent and the above remarks are well meant but completely irrelevant, of course. |