looks like something has been cloned/smoothed out below the word mike.. some kind of editing which appears not to have worked and spoils the image. Maybe even the letters added to the photo in editing??
this made me smile..LOL
she has a wonderful shape! and I like the light.
My only crit are the wrinkled panties and the impression of a jeans line across her belly. I think this should be similar to shooting babies. To ensure their skin has bounced back from constricting clothing, they should be naked at least an hour before you shoot. Just tryin' to help. ;o)
the smoothing of the skin is off putting, and the very harsh edge detail to him/her keeps bringing my eye to it, figuring if youve blackened the back ground etc