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Well it is my highest scorer to date. I am slowly improving, I think. Thanks to all for the constructive comments.
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Flair in the backgroung really messes up your picture. Whats that white thing on the girls ankle. This is digital. Re-shoot your images.
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This reminds me of my sister and I, minus 25 years. :) Thanks for the memory. :)
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I don't like the cropping. You should have cropped around the girls so you would not see the giant spot light in the background.
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I like the subject a lot. Just wish the flash reflection was not there.
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needs tighter crop, getting rid of the distracting bg.
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Sweet picture. I also like the red dresses against the blue sofa. I would suggest cropping it closer to the girls and trying to unclutter the background.
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Flash reflection is a major distraction, along with lens flare, focus is off. Probably would of been better with a tighter crop. Also kinda a stretch as far as meeting the challenge.
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You could have taken a little different angle and cropped a little not to show the whole light setup.. if you wanted to show 'light' as hope, then only some rays could have worked
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The little girls' expressions are great. I think the glaring light at the top of the frame detracts from the shot.
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Very nice! Would have been better without the flash glare. The children are angels!
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it seems just a snapshot. And getting rid of the reflection in the background would make it wormer and give it more feeling
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the girl on the viewer's right and in the foreground is a little too out of focus and the light really distracts me. Good concept though.
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