Greetings from the Critique Club!
So we meet again Kimberly...muwahahahahaaaa...;-) Very cute and funny idea, and it works very well in b/w. I'm not so sure about the 'scarf', I feel it disengages your head and body; maybe doing a veil instead, either just in front of your face or hanging down behind and ofsetting your hair, may have worked and given more of a feeling that says 'bridal'. A little puzzled by the umbrella but maybe it was going to rain and your dress would disintegrate? :-) The angle works though and echoes that of your head so can't complain too much. I'd have liked to see the back of your closer hand in focus and you a few more feet forward away from the basement wall but that's being nitpicky. Did you try to bounce a strobe off the ceiling to knock out the shadows being cast upwards? A suspended piece of foamcore would take care of that.
It's always a pleasure to critique your images, Kimberly, keep up the good work!
Feel free to PM me,
Susan |
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