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I think most people simply didn't get it, especially with the title being Paper Tiger. I had to read the photog notes to see what is in the pic. The scissors and paper are obvious, but the drawn rock is probably the weakest part as it doesn't automatically 'read' rock, again people are primed to see a tiger. A real rock would have worked a lot better. The composition actually isn't all that bad, but the shallow dof, tight crop and the poor lighting aren't helping. Assuming you weren't able to shoot faster than f5.6 or had better lighting, a higher ISO would have helped. Take advantage of Canon's killer ISO!!
Again not a bad concept overall and with a few minor tweaks it could have worked a lot better. Try reshooting using some of the suggestions above; it never hurts.
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