The last girl on the left is out of focus and the poor guy on the end is completely blocked out. And he looks like he knows it, and he seems to be looking straight ahead instead of in the direction of the camera. A smaller aperture and a different angle could have helped.
With the first person, the blue eyed queen, being out of focus even slightly, the image lost all appeal. Great idea but not interesting at all. A narrow DoF with absolute focus on the fabulous blue eyes, the last person also showing face and the removal of the irritating green balloon? top right corner, you might have had something. Sorry, I do not mean to hurt you. Next time have a more critical look.
Not really what I would consider a successful group portrait, considering the only one in focus is the black haired woman with glassess, and you can´t see the persons in the back, but perhaps this has some meaning to you personally, for me as a voter with no relation to these people, this photo simply is not very interesting, and not "different" or "artsy" enough to make me think that this arrangement of people was intentional.
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