Voted earlier in the day, coming back to leave comments now.
I absolutely love the shadow on the wall with the egyptian engravings on it. To me that is what it mysterious. Keeping the statue in the composition lessens the impact of the mystery of what exactly does the creature look like who is casting it.Idea is good but it has potential to be even better. There is just something missing...something that would add to the story and make it even more compelling. Perhaps Anubis could be stalking an archeologist who dared enter a sacred tomb or something else. BTW - One thing to note. I looked at this on the P.C. and later had the chance to look at it on the laptop whose monitor is brighter. The statue almost blends into the darkness with the P.C. while the laptop it is much more visible. With darker images you never how your audience's is seeing it because all monitors are calibrated differently. The darker 'version' I like better because as I mentioned that fabulous shadow on the wall is where the real magic & mystery lies. |