Skin tones look a little peachy, perhaps a cooling filter or slight adjustment in colour balance would have helped; are you a Nikon user? I sometimes feel I get the same strong peachy hue on skin when shooting indoors with my D3100. I like the shot overall, it's really sweet and I absolutely love those dogs! I don't feel a book about them was necessary personally, seems like odd bedtime reading to me and therfore less believeable but composition and exposure are good, plus it's giving kisses! Haha.