next time try a pose that doesnt make the subject look like a football player. i am sure that this woman has very nice curvy lines and that she is not boxy as this image suggests
FWIW I don't remember Norma Jean. She was long dead before I was even a gleam in my Dad's eye. A well set up shot, with good color contrasts. the picture seems to me to be a little small. a wider angle or even a skewed angle might have made this a bit better.
I like the idea, I don't even mind the marilyn reference, but heres the deal. Unless you reeaaallly like feet, the focal point is a bit off. I assume that the point behind this nude shot is to create a feeling of nostalgic sensuality- there is a nice tan back and ass in the shot. But for gods sake crop out the feet or change the angle to make the buttocks, or back or neck or thighs or ...blond hair the focal point, and not the feet.
not sure what to say - the bedding and pose isn't to my tastes at all - however the quality and lighting is well done. I think you really need to have some facial contact with the model.