Once again, my live-in model of 15 years has come through for me. I know I am lucky to be married to someone so interested and involved in my hobby.
If you're interested, here's the story behind the photo. She had a section of her bowel removed five years ago, as a last resort to combat her, then worsening, life-long affliction with Crohns disease. The surgery was miraculously revitalizing for her. So, this photo celebrates life after 40, in more ways than one!
My concept for this Challenge was to compose a nude image which highlighted, rather than hid, the scar resulting from this surgery. We took a few dozen shots from many different angles. Although it featured the scar less prominently than I originally envisioned, I chose this take because I liked the classic Venus pose and how it contrasted with the scar. The weakness of this take is that her side nearest the light source is overexposed.
I spent far more time post-processing this shot than any other I have submitted, although I tried to keep it as subtle as possible. The photo was taken by a window with venetian blinds; I used ISO800 sensitivity to get a short enough exposure time. So, after tweaking the white balance and exposure in the RAW import tool, my workflow, primarily in PS, was:
- degraining
- sharpening
- contrast adjustment
- cosmetic retouching, including use of the clone brush, healing tool, and dodging and burning tools
- resizing
- sharpening
- JPG conversion
I am hoping that DPC voters will accept and appreciate my choice of subject matter, and not find it exploitive or distasteful. I realize that I may be running a risk of offending some by including all of her torso in the image. I did try cropping higher, but felt that did not frame the scar appropriately. So I did some dodging to keep things shadowy, and at least met my own criterion of good taste (and to be sure, there is no 'vagina' visible, which seems to be the basis of the site's nudity rule.)
In any case, my model and I are pleased with the fruit of our labour.
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I agree with the reviewer below who commented that this photo grew on him/her. I did not much like the model's facial expression at first look, but there is something...real about this that arrests one's attention. Very nice
:: Hello from the Critique Club :: ............................................................
Firstly, I think this communicates exactly what you intended with the only exception being that the 'celebration' element is a little played down. For me she looks like she's still a little uncomfortable about life, but grateful for what she has - which is a healthly looking form indeed.
I particularly like the colours - the subdued background works very well. Some reflected light on her face would have been beneficial, which could have been bounced back in using a reflector such as white card or even a creafully placed mirror. Additionally I would have toned down the reds in the flesh tones a little more, perhaps warming them towards yellow using Colour Balance or Hue/Saturation adjustments.
This is my first pass through the nudes II, and well, I do like this one. You have a nice model and I love that you have left much of the picture as natural as possible! This is the reality of life as far as I am concerned...nice shot!
This image is on the whole rather unappealing, the pose is fine I think it is the color and the lighting, Would of been better in black and white perhaps or at least with a warmer more tonal color range.
This is an interesting shot. At first glance it doesn't greatly appeal to me. When I look at it a bit longer though I notice the curve of her pose on the left of the image and the expression on her face. The lighting is a little harsh down her right side. It is good how it highlights the curves though. I'm wondering if this could have been enhanced by using a dark backdrop and some sort of diffusion for the light. The image has a subtle beauty about it which is the most difficult aspect to capture or produce.
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A very nice study with tender lighting and nice background. The model's expression has the innocense that is not always present in these types of shots. Bumping to 7
The idea here is good and the model beautiful and courageous. The photo however lacks either the correct pose or lighting or both (I’m not sure) to capture the full beauty of the contrast between scar and our concept of beauty. Still, I rated it a 6.
The pose of your model sends to the viewer a sense of self confidence. The choice of cropping and the light source adds depth to the overall feeling of the shot. Well Done!
Life lines (not scars) add character to any subject.
This photo is enhanced by the creativity of the lens man and the willingness of the model.
Great photo.
I would not have emphasised her scar. She has a beatiful face and with a more flattering pose she and the whole image would have become more attractive. Also a more attractive background would have helped, rather dull at the moment.
Beautiful model, good lighting,. there's just something about the look on her face though. She doesn't seem to be too happy doing this. High score from me regardless. Good luck with the challenge
Nice pose and composition. Is that natural lighting on the subject? The light seams a little harsh to me. Maybe if you tried to softn the photo a little or maybe you did. Did you try this one in B/W? I bet this would be good in B/W also. Still nice work and good luck!
Wonderful shot, well posed. The light playing down the left side of the body and face is what makes this shot really great. Shame about the distracting corner in the background. It took me ages to notice the scar, so maybe it would have been better not drawing people's attention to it in your title!
Lovely shot. Not so keen on the title (no mark deducted at all though) simply as to me that means a beauty that has been diminished or destroyed by a scar, which in this case is definitely not the case as she is indeed a truly beautiful model. Really like this shot.
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