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Needs a little polishing, perhaps a more portrait-ratio crop; a more interesting light source would have been good, the rubber-looking background isn't very attractive and darkening it would have helped in my opinion, plus I'm not sure what the cut up newspaper is meant to signify? Still, it's in clear focus and I can see you've made an effort to be creative so points for that, is that a Kingsmill 50/50 wrapping? It makes an effectively colourful flower! |