This is a nice shot for a wedding album. I can't really offer you much 'critique' on a shot of this nature, because you are not in control of the total environment. There are some elements of this photo that could be better obviously, but without total control, they would not be possible. One of the most difficult issues of shooting outside is keeping the model's eyes from sqinting. It doesn't look like you were working in sunlight, which is good, but maybe the light behind you is bright enough to make the people squint their eyes. The wind could also be contributing to that as well...
Weddings would be fun to shoot.. keep up the good work :)
Lovely movement of the vail. The light was kind of flat, but the composition and dynamics are great. And of course, it's a great subject for the challenge.
Lovely composition. The veil especiaqlly looks nice being swept away like that. Could have moved the people slightly to the left though as the break in the foliage is distracting.
A top-rate wedding picture. Excellent colors and composition. Though pose, it speaks a lot of hope, wishes and optimism. Congratulations to them and to you.
This is a lovely wedding portrait. I like the way the veil sweeps out to mirror the gown's train, filling up the left side of the shot. I think the little yellow flowers speckling the grass are a subtly exquisite touch, espeically the few that pop up in front of the gown. There is also a cluster of foliage to the left that is a nice spray of texture, balancing that half of the shot. It's hard to tell but the groom doesn't appear to be looking at the camera and his tuxedo blends a bit too much into the shadows of the background. Not a big deal, but for me, it's the only thing that prevents this from being a PERFECT wedding portrait. I gave this a 7 but I'm going to up it to an 8. Good luck.