Thanks for all the lovely comments. A few of you asked about the discrepancy in her story and the time on the clock (3am)... the fact is, I couldn't think of a reason why she'd be coming home with the shopping at 2.30 in the morning! I should have thought of a better caption (I was originally going to go for "infidelity" which was probably better) but it was was already 3am when I submitted the entry.
It was lots of fun creating the storyboards; the "chalk outline" (made out of paper) is probably my favourite prop :-)
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This is great. I like the story, the layout and the lighting, especially the shadow of the wife when she finds them. But the clock says 3:00 not 9:15... (no big deal though, just an observation) I vote 9!
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