Nice idea :-). I like the lighting, especially the way it highlights the doll, very clever. I can't make out the thing in the man's hand though :-( shame, I assume it adds to the "story". I feel that perhaps the background is too busy and/or too much in focus. If the photograph were about the man you would probably get away with it because of the relative size, but the doll has to "work hard" to stand out against it.