Greetings from the Critique Club!
First impression: I gave this shot an 8 in voting, and I don't give them freely. Good job.
Artistic: Nice leading lines and use of thirds, and glad that there isn't anything dead centre. I like the wide angle and low POV...sitting or kneeling on the sand, am I right?
Technical: Good idea to have the horizon straight or you may have drawn some complaints about a tilted horizon. I know it's basically a landscape shot but I think the addition of an extra element to just left of the mid-centre would have ust given it a little extra. Someone walking away, or a dog running towards the shore. Just a thought. Might have been a little bit better with the horizon just a titch lower as it splits the photo almost perfectly in half. At least at that point, it does :-)
Overall: A very pleasing landscape, good work. Keep shooting!
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