I apologise, I am new to this and you are "stuck" with my comments. Pls. realise that this is *my* learning curve more than yours!
I like the way you used the "V" in the sky to frame/draw attention to the 2 people's faces. I love the colour composition with the sky and the human skin.
I would have cropped the picture a little more to get rid of the girl's stomach - not because I have an issue with short tops, but because the stomach as well as the man's arm keep drawing the eye away from the faces (at least it does for me :-)). mabe you could have edited the few reflecting spots out of the background to tidy up the image and also darkened the car on the left a bit more. I think the lighting on the people is good and the soft focus flatters their youthful faces. |