I apologise, I am new to this and you are "stuck" with my comments. Pls. realise that this is *my* learning curve more than yours!
OK, this is well over my head in terms of post editing :-). I keep going back to look at why you did certain things the way you did them regarding the theme of the challange and I personally like that - being challenegd and not everything being "obvious". I love the sky and the bed - the colours, the idea of "heavenly breakfast in bed" (at elast that is my interpretation of your photograph;-)). Other than "balancing" the image, I am not sure why you needed 2 identical but mirror image ladies having breakfast. I would have perhaps also prefered them to be a little more crisp (focus). I DO loke the reflection of the colour of the bed spread on the jacket though, I think that is very clever. I think this is perhaps not the most "beautiful" photo, it lacks some type of "oh" factor for me, but it IS a very clever photo, with, I am sure a lot of work behind it.