This is a nice shot, but ideally all eyes would be open.
This looks partly a nicely framed portrait, but then the blonde on the left starts to make this look more like a candid shot. It adds interest, but it feels like this is neither a posed portrait or a candid shot.
I think the contrast needs to be a wee bit darker on this; the highlights are bright and the midtones look Ok but there's a lack of contrast that I feel would help boost the image. The focus is fine, would've liked it to be a little bit sharper; has a nice sisterly feel to it though.
I would have made sure they were all looking at the camera and ready. I do like the B&W, and the sister on the left does have the funny point and expression.
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