I like the close crop and the direct gaze. The lighting is a bit harsh -- I find the shadow below her nose especially dark. I am not a fan of this kind of selective coloring which I know is very popular with many.
Not really feeling the colour popping here (just personal preference, I don't care for selectively coloured eye images) but my main issue with this is the dark shadow under her nose; it's not flattering on her and totally grabs my eye.