I think the previous commenters made pretty good points. Especially the being a little dark around the sleeper and the spanse between the two subjects.
For me this would have been a more meaningful shot had the sleeper actually been (or appear to resemble) a homeless person. Kind of a Haves and Have-Nots type representation. As it is, it just comes off as staged to me. The light on the aluminum frame near the bottom kind of distracts me a bit.
Maybe just using Car Headlights from the sleepers feet direction would have lightened things up a bit.
Neon challenge or not the concept you have going here is an interesting one. I like it.
hee-hee, I got it....irony....love those shots....despite the overall image quality... a 8 for creativness and thinking deep along with a message too...
the composition is a bit akward with the main focus being at near the very bottom and near the very top. Compositionally there is a vast 'desert' between these two focus points and its not working very well. Great idea, exectution could have been stronger.
Not a particularly interesting shot... The lighting is not great for the shot and I can't really see much of a relation to the challenge topic. There is a neon sign in the window... sure :)
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