An interesting building, and I can see why you'd want to keep the light high enough so it can be seen. Unfortunately, the neon stands out less brightly. Possibly bringing the overall brightness down and increasing the contrast would make the lights stand out better.
I like this shot. IMO, it could have helped to crop the photo to exclude the cars or take the shot at a time when there were no cars. They seem to distract from the focus (the neon).
Tanks to your engage to this challenge. Are you newbie here? Your image are very untought. You passes on a street, saw a neon, take the camera and... click. This is only a snapshot. In a picture of this type you need to use a tripod, to ensure sharpness and do a bit with composition. Ok, this was bad, but continue to try, improving your skills, with us.