Pleasant, good cropping and natural looking. Maybe trimming to exclude the bed post on the top left corner would help leading the eye to the subject. Trimming more on the right as well, but I am less sure. The detail in the air is a bit jagged (not that I would know how to improve that, details defintion in black hair always gives me nightmares :) Good portrait, quite personal.
Has a real natural look to it,don,t think iv'e ever seen anything like this on a Sunday morning.
Anyway its a nice shot and works very well,hope to see it on the front page.
Very good photo, there is a very nice feel to it: simple, joyful, charmful! Also, it perfectly fits the challenge: the crop and composition are perfect. The depth of field also works great here, and leads even more to the focus point (not that it was needed anyway :-)). Great job!