Some people will say titles shouldn't "save" a photo, but a title "clarifying the blurriness" might have helped here, as there's a consistent prejudice here against soft- or out-of-focus pictures unless obviously and appropriately blurred.
At first glance the lack of focus bothered me. But after reflecting for a moment back to my college days, I remember many bleary eyed nights when the text books looked just like this. Nice.
1)Does this Fit the Challenge? (6)
2)Color:(1)
3)Composition(7)
4)Focus:(7) - I assume the out of focus effect relates to the title
5)Background(6)
6)Lighting(4)
7)Does the Title fit Photo:(6)
seems quite blurry to me! I'd liked to have it sharper - maybe with manual focus? As a macro? Don't know, how you did it, but I guess, it could be better - sorry, 4 from me. Kaos
ps: It's a good idea - work on it!