I really like the idea you had, but two things are bugging me:
1) The water droplets on the class and bottle are distracting. A shot like this screams for flawless props.
2) The harsh shadow caused by what I'm guessing is a flash or other bright light on the right side of the setup.
very interesting. I question the aesthetic placement of the bottel in relation to the glass,but that is minor, because there is magic in the shot and I like the overall feel and the border is perfect.