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I think the cropped eyes are a distraction. A square crop without the eyes might be a stronger composition. Very nice lips, though.
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reaally nice but i wish there were color
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Love the eyes at the very top.
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I would have given a higher mark if the image was sharper and had slightly more contrast
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Nice face and like the use of mono.
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Suggest cropping just above the nostrils for more emphasis on grains.
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I love the concept of this. The grains on the lips are irresistable.
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If I were you, since you don't have the focus on the eyes, I would have left them out altogether and made the lips the only feature in the photo. They are in good focus but not quite sharp enough.
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