I need a bit more detail... especially in the eyes... Perhaps a catchlight would raise your score a bit. The green necklace is drawing attention away from her face. A bit of darkening would have helped that, I think. But... that's just my opinion. Others may love this. I do love the composition. That's perfect.
Very good color, good contrast and DoF. Great pose! It looks to me like the focus is on her front shoulder so I am not interpreting this to be out of focus intentionally. Besides the obvious missed focus I feel the post processing was done very well.