Exploring things here, which is good. I think shots like this need some dramatic lighting to add to them, although what you have isn't far off that?
I'm not sure about the focus, I mean have the point of focus about half way into the frame. I'd like to see what it looks like with the imediate foreground sharp. I'd maybe try darkening the edges to focus attention more centrally. What looks like ceiling is a bit distracting. Just thinking of variations...... |