Two's company..... I like hte comp of this version and light explosion from the roof. I might have been tempted to burn in the bottom left and the bright grass causes a little bit of a distraction, but that is being picky!
Beautifully painted. You sure got lucky with those clouds, that adds a whole new dimension. The only thing I would like to see different here is less noise in the image.
Clearly two of you went shooting together - which is perfectly fine. I do however prefer the other shot. Something in your technique has let you down and the result is a very noisy image - probably not to most people's liking but perhaps you wanted it to look that way?? Either this was shot with an ISO set way to high or you brightened it a lot in PP.
The light inside the house / windows is a bit bright and overpowers the shot a bit. The sky is very noisy and doesn’t seem to be focused very well.
A great concept but lacking a little in execution.