Obvious idea but it works well enough. Slightly less central may have worked better? The colours are saturated well, almost to the point of being overdone. The tree down the left of the picture should have been cropped out. Close attention should be given to what is in the frame.
This is the CLASSIC vanishing point. The wood shavings are a wonderful golden/orange color which goes so well with the green. If only your sky would have cooperated - wouldn't a nice crisp blue tie it all togetherr? The placement of the buildings between the first and second left trees was a nice artistic touch. It would be a little stronger if you had included just a bit more tree on the right edge, now just a sliver. Overall - should finish way on up there.
I could just be me but focus looks soft which adds some kind of mystery (others may prefer spot on focus all throughout, though). But I like the intrigue ... is it a path or is it just wood shavings? Does it lead to somewhere, anywhere? I wonder if this will also work if you crop more from the top to make a square rather than rectangle - so your eyes could really be pulled into the vanishing point?
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