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I seem to be in the middle of a string of crazy abstract shots. There's a simplicity I like here - and a true abstraction - but there are things that suggest laziness of intent and execution that I don't like. The closet thing we have to a horizon, that line that interrupts the flare most, seems rather randomly placed: I would see it horizontal, or further away from that; this hints at a real world, but doesn't remove the idea enough to have impact and so looks un-thought-out. The fade of the colour at frame's edge into that beige nothing kind of shade also seems somehwt without effect (other than to make the suggestion of lacking care). My immediate feeling, and some time does not change this much, is of an uninvolving shot ... disinterest. 3 |
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