Great expressions on the players, but pretty high key resulting in
considerable loss of detail. I have the feeling someone photographed
this knowing exactly how it would turn out. (and that's why you entered it) Unfortunately, I'm not bright enough to figure it out.
(Note to self: must ramp up high key mechanism)
Crop out the arm at right (one with red shirt) and the hand at bottom left and make it a little darker (looks overexposed) so the background isn't so bright. Great expressions on subjects and good composition.
I see touch, textures in the ment's faces... I would have loved if the wood they were playing on showed more texture in either smooth reflections or rough graininess.