I am not competent enough to comment or compare entries to Ben's style so I am not going to try.
Such a lonely little plant trying to grow in the murky water and in the shade of the rock that dwarfs it. Thank you for your story.
You got his smooth blur perfectly. His use of minimalism is captured really well here. I love the simple things. That bending plant growing out of the water is a signature of his. Nice going and good luck.