I really like you take on this challenge. It's a little different, but not so much so that it's a strech to meet the challenge.
The only concern I have about tis is the crop. There is really no reason to have all that wassted space at the bottom. I would crop it about the edge of the grass. That would also help getting your lights on the bottom "thirds" of the image.
Good Luck!
Shots like this are so dependent on your viewer's precise set-up, that I think it's difficult to be sure what exactly you were after. I see a vague roadscape with those lines, but a touch brighter and I see a skyline etc., a touch darker and I see only the hint of a road. Working with such very subtle graduations in the shadow areas is, I think, unlikely to get you a reaction you can really rely on.
For me, it has the beginnings of an impact, but the muted nature of those surroundings confuses things.
A good try but in my opinion does not meet the challenge. "parallel lines converge together." isn't actually in the picture. would have made a nicer picture if you went closer to the road and and shot a longer shot with the lighted objected further away. now not only would you have to road that would have fit the challenge but the lighted object (motorcycle I assume) would appear that is a 1 light splitting into 2... or at least it sound right in my head. lol