I love this image...it has all the feel of an old-school family snapshot, the cut off at the knees, the pissed off look on the kid's face. You shouldn't have added the text though. :(
Very HDR ish but effective with the kid in the fore. Title not on but not deducting points. I almost made the same mistake and know how easy this can happen
I'm sure I'm not the only one to say this but you're not supposed to include text in your photo. Even though it was made to look like a polaroid, in the end it's just an image.