photo quality: 7
title/narrative: 5
I like the black and white (tonemapped?) shot. Could be made better by the camera being at a different height. I like the first half of the title, but the 2nd half doesn't seem to fit the image. Everything is so perfect in the shot, clean, organized, that nothing seems wrong. What would make this narrative stronger could be something so easy as having a plate with food on it, or a chair knocked over.. |