hehe, it made me laugh. Fine idea, but i have to agree with Jeffrey, had you slammed down some nice bare footprints leading to the water (and then walked out of the frame in the tide) it probably would have scored a bit higher.
I guess the idea is you drowned yourself? If so, footsteps leading into the water would've sold it more than footsteps leading off the right side of the image. I'm also not clear you would've stacked up your boxes and laid your cameras out so neatly. So - a good concept, nicely done memoir, but some details aren't meshing for me.