I like the expression on his face. I like the concept. The large empty space at top left seems to be a problem. I'm not sure how you could do the shot without leaving that hole. Perhaps trimming some of the left and top boarders would help. 6
Ha, this is funny! Great way to portray a salesman's occupation.
I don't know if you planned this, but to me the irony of the computer hidden under the coat and yet, the photo taken in front of a portrait background cracks me up! Wonderful creative thinking. The only nit pick I have is the shadow of from the head.
I don't know why, but I've been laughing at this picture for a while now; it's had me in hysterics. Maybe it's the look on the man's face. One of my top scorers this week :)
-Annida
I love this photo. Whether that's you or an actor, the expression is right on!. This is really great. I love everything about it including, and especially, the humor. It's a really technically good portrait. I have to give you a 10. Lots of luck.
Put a touchpad on that thing, and we can talk. Subect is nicely lit and posed (great expression), but I'd prefer the background a bit farther away and better control of the shadows there. The sweater over the LCD is a bit of a bummer, too. Not to be too critical - it's technically much better work than most of what one usuallly sees here.