With a more traditional and subdued catch light, this would have been a sure fire 10 from me. You have captured such a delightful expression. However, the ringlight flash catch-lights completely dominates the portrait, and my eyes constantly draw back to them; they seem so much at odds with the soft delicateness of the photo.
Back to edit typos, and to bump to 7. I adore ebvery aspect of this photo - with the exception of those darn lights!!! The ring-flash has given the most gorgeous, even, lighting to the photo - difficult one.
Beautiful portrait, catching an intriguing expression. The catch-eye lights make her eyes look strange and steals from this otherwise beautiful image ...