i totally agree that the pencil should be straight on and that the makeup is far from perfect. me and the model both know that, but this is what I get for rushing (last day shooting).
Oh. My. As a make up artist- I'm instantly drawn to this image. I realize this challenge was basic editing but I'm DYING to fix her brows, the smudge on the left eye, straighten the pencil...but enough about my OCD. I love the lines of this image- the way she dominates the left hand side while the kohl liner takes my eye to the other edge of the image. I like the way the 'blacks' in this image all complement each. Brows framing the eyes, outlined by the lashes all underlined by the pencil. It works for me. Well done.