Thanks for the feedback. The background is the killer for me too. It was part of an arranged shoot and I thought the organisers missed a trick but choosing the location that they did. I wanted to put them image in for review and comments.
I think the photo is very good with a hard edged contrast and deep saturated colors. One thing that could be changed is the background. It is dark and busy with lots of textures that overpower and hide the subject somewhat. I would prefer a more grey urban background or something plain and simple.
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