I'm not sure if you were aiming for soft focus, but the image is overall slightly out of focus. The lighting is not the most flattering... strong lighting from the side exaggerates imperfections in her skin like on her forehead. Not voting, just providing feedback.
I like the touch of yellow here, but the lighting and composition aren't very flattering. There are dark circles under her eyes and no catch lights which create a dead, haunted feel. Also, her arm is cut off in a very awkward place on the bottom of the image.
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