Same model (my daughter), same fabric, same location (by the basement window). The good news is I think this is a substantial improvement over my original Librodo entry. The bad news is there is still so much room to improve. But, it has only been a few months, right? At this rate in a couple of years I should be able to get a pretty good picture.
There are things I would change about the composition if I could reshoot it. There are things I would have liked to do in processing that I have not figured out how to do yet. However, given my time, talent and experience to this point, this will have to do.
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A very sweet image and, if I spotted correctly, certainly an improvement from your first take. My only observation here is that the veil is covering just part of her left eye. I think it should cover the whole eye to avoid any distraction.
Very pretty photo. I'm still not sure how I feel about an eye covered up. I know to some it adds a sense of mystery, but to me it takes away half of the most important feature to a woman's face.
Technically good. Her expression seems a tad forced. I wonder what it would have looked like if we were able to see both of her eyes. Great catch light. :)
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