That's a hell of an improvement, and a fabulous shot in its own right. Was one of my 10's. That pronounced fishook at the high end of your score chart is quite rare. Congrats on top-10!
I voted first, and now I going through to see if I can find the originals to see how I voted on the first shot.
Drat! I didn't vote on the original. I like this one much, much better. Love the toning on this!! It was an 8 from me. Beautifully done!
Love it! Lots of details on a otherwise interesting decayed building. Lithing, contrast and saturation to perfection. Great street image... makes you wonder...