This is an attempt to recapture my not-well-received Henri Cartier-Bresson entry. It might even be the same girl on the way to work in the morning. But no wristwatch this time. Anyway close enough - and probably this one will not be well received either.
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Your second attempt got a lot of things right. The angle of the camera is better especially without the twisted horizon. The exposure is good and the PP is brighter with a wider range of highlights and shadows. A couple of things suffered in the second take such as the sharpness due to the camera shake. The blurred woman in the foreground is not a problem though as she is moving which adds to the dynamic feel.
Very well done! You found a good location and a model with clothes that resemble HCB years. I also like the motion blur on her (beautiful) legs. Gave you an 8 but will bump you up. Hope that this was not staged.
In Cartier-Bresson style, I think the blur of movement is spot on. But I wonder if that will end up hurting your overall score (I would have likely take a point off for it without the title).
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